It's excellent. I know they like shorter letters when they decide to publish. Perhaps lose a few of the adjectives describing Jacoby's poor judgement and let his vs. your argumenst stand.
he irks me often, too. i usually don't even read his column because it's not value-added or trustworthy.
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Date: 2006-07-29 06:17 pm (UTC)he irks me often, too. i usually don't even read his column because it's not value-added or trustworthy.